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you hold somthing over me
but dont relize it
you have my heart in your hand
but dont feel it
you make my chest pound until it hurts
but dont hear it
you hold my gaze
but dont see it
because of you my emotions feel like a never ending cork screw

this i tell you is my love but this love i hate
this is a one sided love such as that for a celebrity
you pour all your love into this one person
but because they do not know they never give it back

this is my soul being pourn into this poem
this poem is somthing im writing just for you
for your eyes to take in and do with it as you please
but if you dont like it give it back

youhold somthing over me
but dont relize it
you have my heart in your hand
but dont feel it
you make my chest pound until it hurts
but dont hear it
you hold my gaze but dont see it
because of you my emotions feel like a never ending cork screw
but thats not possible because all cork screws must come to an end
one way or another
sorry for the spellng im horrible at it
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:iconcrimson-grrl:
aiyaaaa great job gabb! :heart: as always, the emotion and the kind of desperation that you put into your writing makes the reader really feel it ^u^ kepp it up! lol i dont even know how to up load writing XD anywho i cant wait to read more! :iconiloveitplz:
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:iconcrimson-grrl:
lol ur very welcome ^u^
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:iconanimefangirl23:
i didnt think i was that good
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:iconcrimson-grrl:
it was awesome! ALSO ON ANOTHER NOTE LOL YEA IM CHANGIN DA SUBJECT DID CHU SEE FMA BROTHERHOOD LAST NIGHT AHHHHH I ALMOST PEED IT WAS SOOOOOO AWESOMEEEEE AHHHHHHHHHHH
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:iconcrimson-grrl:
DAMN IT WOMAN ;n; o just go to aultswim.cm and watch it there =u=
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